Last week, 4I and 4V went to Cariu. When we got to the swing bridge, I wasn't frightened, but Bills' hands were shaking like a chicken in shock, poor thing! But, he managed to get across it with the help of Eliana, the 4I pixie!
Then, we hiked up and down the mountains. Hard work, but we saw a beautiful landscape with magnificent, huge, pine trees and tiny, rattan huts and stalls.
I took several pictures of deer with my camera. And the journey, plodding, went on and on.
Finally, come hometime, we had to cross over the swing bridge again. Bill was frightened again. Just as we were about to start crossing, the swing bridge suddenly broke. Two guys (horrors) on the other side, had cut it with a knife. Now, we were all worried.
Then Bill saw a pine tree that had fallen across the ravine. He then helped us all to get across the ravine.
Bill, who was a chicken at first, had turned into a champ - our champion 4I risk-taker!
Celine 25 February 2008
Written with some edits - the student has based the story on selected vocabulary, having to use the words:- risk taker, camera, something huge or tiny, and landscape.
The writing was completed within 40 minutes.
Part of "Let's Read Week."
Phil
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3 comments:
I think this brilliantly describes the topic Celine, especially when we see that you've used a real-life situation as well.
You really are maturing.Absolute top shelf!
Phil
this is a impressive story about the excursion lo
I really love your story
Who wrote : "I really love your story."?
Names are very important!
P.
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